Happy to help. Please paste the article text you want revised.
A couple of quick questions so I can tailor the rewrite:
– Keep the original tone and length, or is some tightening/expansion okay?
– Should headings, quotes, and bullets stay as-is?
– Any keywords, names, or terms I must not change?
What I’ll do:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive voice for rhythm.
– Rewrite sentences that begin with “This …” so they start differently.
– Replace “Besides that” and “Therefore” with the requested transitions: “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is,” adjusting punctuation for flow.
– Avoid repeating the same word at the start of consecutive paragraphs.
Mini example of the changes you’ll see:
– Original: “This shows how the market shifted. Besides that, demand increased. Therefore, prices rose.”
– Revised: “The data shows how the market shifted. What’s interesting too, demand increased. Well, here it is: prices rose.”
Send the text when you’re ready, and I’ll turn it around quickly.